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XYZ résumé bullets (Google) template

For rewriting an existing résumé's bullets, or a résumé for a data-driven employer. Origin: Laszlo Bock, Google's former head of People Operations, in Work Rules! (2015): "Accomplished [X] as measured by [Y], by doing [Z]".

Start from this templateFree, no account needed. The blank is written with guidance in each section, ready to fill in.

Structure

  1. A standard reverse-chronological layout in which every bullet follows the XYZ formula

How a tough reader scores it

When you score a draft against this format, the Critic evaluates these résumé bullets against the XYZ formula. The weights add up to 100; the fixes for the weakest criteria arrive as cards in the editor.

CriterionWeight
Every bullet names an accomplishment, not a duty25
Every bullet has a measure, a number or a defensible comparison30
The method is specific enough to be repeated or questioned15
Bullets are one line, past tense, no pronouns10
The strongest bullet in each role comes first10
Measures are plausible and would survive an interview question10

How it works in SecondPen.ai

Open the template and the editor writes the blank once, with a line of guidance under each heading that you delete as you fill it in. Write your abstract and the editor names the format it reads like. Ask for a document with a slash command and it offers to start from the matching format. When the draft is ready, the Critic scores it against the criteria above, the way this format's toughest reader would, and the three highest-leverage fixes become Editor cards.

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